HEY SMELLYFACE, I'M HERE TO CRITIQUE YOUR WORK ;D Personally, I think the colours in this are amazing and I love how you captured the sun-beamy thing. Shh.. I'm not technical. You're just amazing at pictures and this is one of your best. You obviously have a nack for this kind of thing. Oh, am I supposed to say how you could improve this? Sorry! I guess I would have done it from a slightly lower angle/viewpoint. But that would blare the sun into the picture, so maybe not? I really don't know how you could improve on something you're amazing at. Keep at it cinnamon girl.
Every good artist is critical of their work. What I do after I take a picture is I take several more of them with small modifications. Then I look at them on the computer later. Granted I am disappointed with 85% of them but really it's about perspective. Keep posting your pictures. You might not like them but someone here might.